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KILLERS IN OUR MIDST

The good dies and the sick goes to prison

As drug lords and warlords vie for terrain

The Merchants of Bay street smirk

Dry dust settles and hurt feelings subside

Its life in a zoo of the 21st century

Getting wiser to battle new viruses

Yet ruthlessly emptying the rain forests

Butchering and dissecting good mother earth

For precious minerals and evil believers

As non-believers pollute our blue planet

What have we become without our humanity

When we lie and die for the almighty dollar

Stifling the truth for our selfish ambition'

Using the flag or religion as a crutch

And grasping nothing from history

The truth, feelings, pride are still alive

And the good will always triumph

For after deleting the violence and vices

Deep down man is a good person

When he can forgive and be charitable

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It's very lovely. Beautiful words, great job. You just captured all what we go through in this cruel dark world, and yet brightened it up at the end with an optimistic view. I would have loved some rhyming though! But, overall you did well man, thumbs up!

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