Hmmmmm Life?

Eight Knots of Life

[Someone learns that suicide is not the answer.......... %26#125;

Dreary attic I loath

I have roamed here to rest

Bitter life shall be gone

So down low, I detest

*

Leaning o'er I do spy

A foot long string of knots

Those mama had given

Those I had forgot

*

Eight knots so rust tight

I can not help but, try

To figure the meaning Of

These knots I untie

*

I have won the first battle

Now live with suspicion

I lear at everyone

I am, my own prison

*

A second small triumph

Wiggling the knot free

Seems so long now, since I've

Seen my warm family

*

A third (skilled master) beat

I am saddened, no cares

No joy cometh by me

No compassion, I fear

*

Battle four was so tough

I'm so sick, don't believe

All my plans up in flames

To look forward, I heed

*

Dreadful attic I loath

Find my noose, I am bound

By fear and much hatred

And whom too was around

*

Hmmmmm Life?agv

Very good!

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This is a disturbing piece, where did you get your inspiration?

It seems like a horror poem, its very good. It has great rhythm.

Keep Writting!
Another great poem.
This is interesting

it talks of suicide

it is not the answer

but selfish way of ending life.

As I was reading this poem

I was assuming the * is a knot

the poem talk about prison also